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说起雅思写作，已经有不少的烤鸭们为之流泪，对于经常5.5写作的烤鸭们一直在想一个问题：
为什么这次又是5.5？怎么说也不合符情理，感觉已经写的很不错，没有7分总有6分吧？
先说第一点：雅思写作考试，审题非常重要，常常很多考生担心考试时间不够用，拿到写作题目，还来不及仔细看题，就开始动笔写作。
考完之后，心里还沾沾自喜，哇塞，这次的题目特别简单，写起来那是文思泉涌呀，这次稳了，写作不是7分也好歹是个6.5吧，然后成绩一出来，傻眼了，6分？？？5.5分？？？怎么可能？
易错案例分析范文一
但是这样的情况并不是个例，不然怎么说，雅思套路深，只想回农村呢？接下来，带同学们来审一道，经典的易错题，同学们请看：
Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have negative effects on young people’s writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree?
请同学们先审一下题，思考下你的立场。审完题后接下来一起看看大家会常出现的2种回答：
第一种中立——我承认用电脑跟手机来交流确实对年轻人的阅写能力会有消极影响，但是这样做对阅写能力也是有积极影响的。
或者部分同意——我承认用电脑跟手机来交流，整体而言确实对年轻人的阅写能力会有消极影响，但是这样做也会对阅写能力有一定的积极影响。
我很能够理解大家为什么会这样写。无外乎是这样子比较好凑够字数！然鹅，这个题目看起来好像是一个简单得不能再简单的题目，但是实际上背后的逻辑还真的不简单！如果，你真的是写了中立或部分同意，不好意思，你已经跑题了。
案例解析
这里的逻辑其实非常简单，就是题目本身并没有否定用电脑跟手机交流不会带来积极影响。因为，一件事情当然有可能既有利，也有弊，而且利跟弊是可以共存的。
举个通俗易懂的例子，当你谈恋爱的时候，你的对象是不是会哄你开心，给你惊喜？但是，这就意味着对方不会有时候惹你生气吗？让你分分钟想让对方原地爆炸吗？懂了吗？这两件事情是相互独立，可以同时发生的。
所以，这个题目就相当于在问你：你对象会惹你生气，你同意吗？然而你跟我讲，没错，我对象是会惹我生气，但是我对象有时候也会逗我开心。这个时候，你就相当于写了一段题目并没有要求你回应的文字。你不跑题，谁跑题呢？
所以，这个时候，这个题目最简单，也是最好操作的立场就是，完全同意题目的说法：没错，用电脑跟手机来交流，确实对年轻人的阅读写作能力会有消极影响。然后用两个主体段分别论证会有怎样的消极影响即可。
高分范文：
Some educators have warned that the prevalence of mobile phones and the internet has a negative effect on adolescents’ academic ability. I agree with this view.
Firstly, the wide use of “Internet English” is regarded as the culprit of the declining writing skills. One obvious reason is that young adults may make some grammatical mistakes unconsciously because of the frequent use of improper abbreviations and punctuation on mobile devices, and this might pose a threat to their future career where a professional writing ability is required in most companies. Therefore, many linguists have expressed their concerns that the instant messaging and chatting on mobile phones might harm the ability of using formal written English.
Secondly, the poor reading proficiency can be put down to the frequent use of technologies as well. Compared to the older generation, young people today are cluttered with different gadgets, like iPad and iPhone. For instance, with easy access to wifi, they can surf the internet anywhere and anytime to follow the latest information of their idols in another country. However, most social networks deliver fragment and useless information, which not only steals time away from solitary reading but also undermine the ability to think independently. In my opinion, this phenomenon should be reversed as soon as possible because reading has a profound effect on a nation’s future.
In conclusion, while these electronic devices make the communication much more convenient, I am in the camp that they might affect young people’s academic performance negatively.
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易错案例分析范文二
同理，我们再来看一个类似的题目。
In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
我们先来读懂题目的意思，在今天的许多国家，儿童的饮食习惯和生活方式与前几代人不同。有人说这对他们的健康有负面影响。你在多大程度上同意或不同意？
首先题目给出了背景，现代孩子的饮食习惯跟生活方式跟上一代差别很大。然后提出观点，有人说这对他们的健康有不良影响。跟上一个题目一样，某件事情有不良影响，同意不同意。
案例解析
最简单的方法就是直接同意，因为没有一件事情是完美的，挑刺还不简单吗？同学们可以直接分两段，一段论证饮食习惯带来的不良影响，一段论证生活方式带来的不良影响。既很好回应了题目要求，也没有跑题。
高分范文：
It has recently been suggested that the way children eat and live nowadays has led to a deterioration in their health. I entirely agree with this view, and believe that this alarming situation has come about for several reasons.
To begin with, there is the worrying increase in the amount of processed food that children are eating at home, with little or none of the fresh fruit and vegetables that earlier generations ate every day. Secondly, more and more young people are choosing to eat in fast-food restaurants, which may be harmless occasionally, but not every day. What they eat there is extremely high in fat, salt and sugar, all of which can be damaging to their health.
There is also a disturbing decline in the amount of exercise they get. Schools have become obsessed with exams, with the shocking result that some pupils now do no sports at all. To make matters worse, few even get any exercise on the way to and from school, as most of them go in their parents" cars rather than walk or cycle. Finally, children are spending far more time at home, playing computer games, watching TV or surfing the Internet. They no longer play outside with friends or take part in challenging outdoor activities.
To sum up, although none of these changes could, on its own, have caused widespread harm to children"s health, there can be little doubt that all of them together have had a devastating effect. This, in my opinion, can only be reversed by encouraging children to return to move traditional ways of eating and living.
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